I'm so happy you replied tonight!

Jamie I can't thank you enough for your feedback tonight. The color in the background isn't white it's actually the color of the script (sort of khaki creamish).. we'll see how it prints. It might be too empty like you're saying. I like the image too I think it tells the story very well. I'll print both. One with the effect and one without. Thanks again, I really appreciate your comments. Good luck with your design!