Tarrain,
I like that you removed the squares from the image. It's a beautiful image with a lot going on so I don't think you need the square effect. Placing the title in the white definitely makes it more legible but I think that the white feels very stark. The image has a number of soft light colors that you could pull from it for a background color for the rest of the jacket. Maybe the cream color from the letters would look nice and make it more visually cohesive. Just a thought...
