I know it is a little late now, but I wanted to add my feedback on the new designs. Your concept has really been condensed and brought together much better. With your navigation pages and the tabs on all screens it is much clearer how to navigate throughout the story and gives a better idea of the options of what you are able to do on the pad.
These updates are so much better! I also really like the all of the main pages with the bright solid colors, they really pop. Good revisions! :)
